Contents Page Mock-ups + Evaluation

I tested how text would work with the images for the contents page. 

This image has good and vibrant colors, and the posture of the model is great because it's right in the middle. The photo has balance as well. However, there might too many colors going on because it's too distracting as there are different color in every area of the page, the darker colors would put too much weight on the page visually, leading the reader to read only the right side of the page because it's easier to see as opposed to the lighter colors (left). I also think that the design wouldn't be flat enough, so that means more emphasis is put on the image, and less about the actual features. 

The colors are relatively flat, so it's not too distracting. The image and layout are unconventional which is what my audience would expect. The text wrap is tight and effective, and there is visual balance in the page. There is space for social network information, and I could also add the editor's note at the top as well. 

I really like the use of perspective text and the model's pose, who is viewing a painting intently, but it's almost like the model is staring at the text. This sort of pose in an art gallery is expected and recognised by all those interested in art. However, it might be too predictable and plain, and there isn't a suitable place for the editor's note.