I think that this design is much stronger as a product; I felt that having only one full image that the reader could see of the artist's work would not fulfill the purpose of the spread which is to introduce and showcase a new artist. However, I didn't want to just include a montage of pictures next to each other so therefore I replaced the image of the Eiffel Tower with two images, each divided into two horizontal segments like a jigsaw. If you look closely the top left image is the same image as the bottom right image. I also corrected the text wrap and the alley between the columns. I added "palette magazine // november issue" to embed the name of the magazine as well as this issue into the reader's mind, making the spread more memorable.
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